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高考英语总的时间为120分钟,虽然它没有对具体每一部分的时间做出详细的规定,但是我们认为合理安排时间是相当必要的。有的学生认为写作文的时间就像“拉橡皮筋”,伸缩度很大,前面的题目做得快了,写作文的时间就多一点,前面的题目要是做得慢了,写作文就草草了事。殊不知,这正是英语高考写作文的大忌。英语高考的作文看似容易,人人都有话可说、有文字可写,但要把作文写好,写得让阅卷老师心甘情愿地给你高分,却并非一件容易的事情。事实上,每年高考英语作文的平均得分并不高,而高考英语作文的分数却占了英语总成绩的1/6。由此可见,英语高考的写作还是应该予以相当程度的重视,考试的时候应该就时间等问题进行合理的安排。本书的编者认为,英语高考写作的时间应该为30分钟左右。

具体步骤和时间安排如下:

第一步:审题、确定命题形式

根据给出的提纲或者要求,确定属于何种命题形式(参考第三章),快速确立自己的思路,建议此时将它们写在草稿纸上,这一过程对于确定文章的主线非常重要,不要怕耽误时间。由于试题中一般都给出了中文线索,你所列的主线内容最好与它们保持一致,以免跑题。审题时间可以安排3—5分钟。

第二步:选择模板

在确定命题形式之后,依据本书介绍的题型,迅速选择合适的模板(参考第五章)。这一过程需要1分钟左右的时间。

第三步:进行填空

将已经构思好的具体内容填入模板中。虽然整个框架已经由模板确定,但是要拿到20分以上甚至满分,就必须注意具体的写作元素。如多种句式(简单句、并列句以及复合句)的运用,使文章更为灵活;长短句的交错出现,使文章富有节奏感;若干长句后出现的一个短句可以明显地突出观点;连接词的运用,可以使文章富有层次、连贯;通过举例、对比等,可以使文章更为生动易懂;若能恰如其分地运用一些修辞,如比喻、引用俗语或者名人警句等,就能起到“画龙点睛”的作用,使文章熠熠生辉。另外,注意所举实例切忌不符合题意或太浅显。这一步骤需要20—25分钟左右。

第四步:修改文章

在写作过程中,由于精神紧张、时间匆忙等原因,难免会出现这样那样的错误,最后的修改工作是必不可少的,这一步骤需要3—5分钟。修改文章主要考虑以下两点:

1.语法,如主语和谓语在人称和数上要保持一致,全篇时态保持一致等等;

2.拼写,写作时要书写清楚,尽量避免拼写错误,不要给阅卷老师留下连单词都不熟悉的坏印象,因小失大。

具体写作步骤可以用下图表示:

审题、确定命题形式——>选择模板——>进行填空——。修改文章


现在,我们试举一例进行说明:

第一步:审题、确定命题形式

Guided Writing Directions: Write an English composition in over 120 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.

你应聘了一家知名外贸(foreign trade)公司的市场助理(marketing assistant)这一职位,请写一封自荐信。

 从该作文题目给出的要求来看,这篇文章应该属于“应用文中的求职信”这一种命题形式。

第二步:选择模板

确定本作文题目为应用文的命题形式之后,选择该模板。

第三步:进行填空

将自己熟记的模板直接写到作文中,并将空格处的内容填上。在此我们进行一次演示,为了方便考生阅读,我们将另起一页用左右对照的方式给出示范。

模板:

Dear Sir or Madam:

I am showing my interest in the position 1. _________________ you advertised in the 2. _____________________, for the requirements closely parallel my education and experience.

From 3. ____________________ to ____________, I majored in 4. ____________________ in 5. ____________________. The courses covered 6. ____________________. They integrated theories with practice well, which undoubtedly gave me a clear picture of 7. ____________________.

In addition, I took many part-time jobs during college life in order to broaden my view and enhance my competitive abilities. In 8. ____________, I worked as an 9. ____________________ in 10. _____________________. I succeeded in 11. _____________________.

I am deeply convinced that my abilities will be proven to be suitable to all companies. But your company, an internationally famous firm, is sure to provide me with great opportunities and excellent career path.

I would appreciate if I am given the chance to talk with you face to face. I will be available at 12. _____________________ in the day and 13. _______ at night. Thank you for your consideration.

根据模板填写的范文:

Dear Sir or Madam:

I am showing my interest in the position marketing assistant you advertised in the recruitment website, for the requirements closely parallel my education and experience.

From 2000 to 2004, I majored in business management in AAA University. The courses covered microeconomics, macroeconomics, marketing, international trade and so on. They integrated theories with practice well, which undoubtedly gave me a clear picture of marketing assistant.

In addition, I took many part-time jobs during college life in order to broaden my view and enhance my competitive abilities. In the summer vacation of 2002, I worked as a business analysing assistant in the famous consulting company, ABC. I succeeded in designing a promotion project for a software firm which gained substantial returns.

I am deeply convinced that my abilities will be proven to be suitable to all companies. But your company, an internationally famous firm, is sure to provide me with great opportunities and excellent career path.

I would appreciate if I am given the chance to talk with you face to face. I will be available at 13666663333 in the day and 55554444 at night. Thank you for your consideration.


                                 Yours,Francisco

第四步:修改文章

    写作时难免会有些错误,所以,文章写完之后一定要进行检查、修改,尤其要注意时态、人称和数的一致,另外,仔细看看拼写正确与否,这里不再详述。


 


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